Well for my titlescreen I thought there would be a menu or button instructions so that's why mine is kind of empty :) The screenshot looks great, I'll be redoing the goals tomorrow and maybe a new titlescreen.
Version 2 of my titlescreen:
You've got mail :) If you allow me, I could post the preview graphics for others to see?
Edit: I've gotten permission, this is a preview image (it does not reflect final graphics and/or gameplay):