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Anyone wanna analyze my spriting?

Discussion in 'Creativity section (Sound / Graphics / Music)' started by JDTAY, Jun 17, 2017.

  1. JDTAY

    JDTAY Still Fresh

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    I've put over 80 hours into Aseprite, and this is probably the best thing I've ever come up with:

    wsprite01.png

    At least it is good though, right? Or maybe not? Go ahead, I'm not afraid of criticism. Not when I have Wendell Best, a.k.a. the Best in the West backing me up. ;)
     
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  2. levi

    levi Still fresh, damnit!

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    Is it the macarena?

    More seriously, I would like to see these used in an animated gif to see how they work, if you can come up with a sequence where they'd all be used.
     
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  3. Wrath Of Khan

    Wrath Of Khan Soul soother...

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    Looks good.
     
  4. comradekingu

    comradekingu Glowing ember

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    Work in some shadow. Back of the brim, underneath the lifed arm.
    You can also use gradients for more depth. You can also ease up on the outline some places.
    I am unsure if those are gloves or guns. If the former, then hold farther in. If the latter, than aim from the eye.
    Putting the belt that low, makes it look like asitting pose.
    I find it unlikely that someone would dress up in all the same colour. A lighter shirt would do wonders.
    Picture 3 drops a pixel out of the boot height.
    Add more movement to the transition from one stance to the other, it is very twitchy now,
    for example the gun moves just a-b.
    Get some movement into the clothes and hat.
    Overall very good, i like the beard.
     
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  5. Wally

    Wally Moderator Staff Member

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    Seconded for animated gif to see how they work before any judgement is made :)
     
  6. kuru

    kuru Irate Pyrate

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    What tovarish said. Work a light source in there, unless you're planning to use something like Sprite Lamp.
    Anybody looking forward to the Dark Tower movie? The character reminds me of the Gunslinger.
    gunslinger_chibi.jpg
     
  7. ElPoco

    ElPoco Very Active Member

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    This is a "flat sprite". If that's the look you're going for, you can keep it like this. But if you want something more "detailed" or nicer looking, you might want to add more shadows/highlights.
    Also if the black things on the hands are supposed to be guns, you might want to make them a bit longer, because now they look more like gloves.
    I'd also have the belt a bit higher on the sides (or lower in the middle), to give it more depth
     
  8. JDTAY

    JDTAY Still Fresh

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    Oh man, that's quite the list. Wasn't expecting "very good" at the end of it.

    Didn't realize my guns were that ambiguous either. I'll definitely work on it.
     
  9. Eight Bit

    Eight Bit Advanced Member

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    C64 has 3 colour sprites and those have double width pixels. So I think the amount of colours used is great! but if I would have to use it in a C64 game I'd have to use a couple of sprites over each other to make this look like intended (outline/black as a single colour sprite overlay) in which case you would have one more colour to choose from for the underlying colour-fill sprite.
    Indeed the guns could use a little longer barrels but I think you did a very good job on the characterisation with the use of so little pixels!

    Can you make him walk down and up too? I might get inspired to start coding a cowboy shooter! :D
     
  10. JDTAY

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    I've started working on NPCs to go with him. Meet the Mayor.
    wnpc.png
     
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