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LATEST ART : PHOTOS / GRAPHICS by me : seb doppler aka el joker

Discussion in 'Creativity section (Sound / Graphics / Music)' started by el joker, Sep 7, 2016.

  1. el joker

    el joker Still Fresh

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    ON THE ROAD


    --- Double Post Merged, Feb 23, 2017, Original Post Date: Feb 23, 2017 ---
    NAT [ HANDMADE ]

     
  2. el joker

    el joker Still Fresh

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    YASHICA FR 1

     
  3. el joker

    el joker Still Fresh

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    COPYCAT

     
  4. FBnil

    FBnil ¡sɥʇuoɯ oʍʇ uı ɐɹʎԀ

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    not sure if you are getting sloppy, or more focused on theme. You see, the NAT picture for example, does not align the tiles except the ones on the right, which are not "straight"), which triggers my focus on the ugliness of the tiles, and distracts from the NAT (I actually read NAITI in the text).
    The Yashika suffers from the same fate: one of the lines is cut at the bottom. Either crop the red line out, or crop it less and rotate to align. Make the centerpiece the interesting part, not the other way around.

    Copycat is taken straight, but intentionally diagonal (with mirrored faded words, which are hard to reproduce if it was a mere stencil). Good one, I enjoyed it.

    On the road is not themed well, I can clearly see you are just off the road, not ON the road. (probably to get that reflection on the ugly mud). But ON the road makes it more exciting (and not only because a car could be coming, so you need to take the picture fast). Did you take it from behind the window of the car and not outside? I can see some reflection (but as I have no old camera's, it could be an artifact from the camera itself). The sky is ok, but nothing interesting is happening (no bird, no ship on the water, nothing interesting in the foreground). By giving the picture another name. Like "Breathe" you imply there is wind (and the clouds match that windiness), or 5 miles to go (implying you are hitchhiking to somewhere) makes the picture get another theme, and be more than what it is now.

    Hope you like my critique and keep on making pictures!
     

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