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Walk into the Shadows, Step from the Light
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More !More! i crave more
great again.
Toady do good
great again.
Toady do good
Am i being killed off? I want to be back in already!
Fair enough. Can I see some of your literary work?Why are you people enjoying this crap? People today...
I don't usually go for the typical "don't rip him if you can't do better" I just think your criticisms were really mean and badly though out. You try to come across all amazing and superior with your commonly one sentence posts. Yet really you just look like a dumbass...:rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes:
The typical response. By that logic, nobody can comment on anything unless they can do better.
Why are you people enjoying this crap? People today...
That's more like itWhy are you people enjoying this crap? People today...
What was the point of that response anyway, Don`t like it, don`t read it. But i guess you in a minority as everyone else seems to be enjoying it. <_<
I`m all for constructive criticism, But that response doesn`t come anywhere near it.
Trooper
By unpopular demand - What needs to be Changed:
- Paragraphs. Structure is nice.
- Humour. OH NO SAM FISHER IS STUPID. OH LOOK GIMP JUST INSULTS EVERYONE. OH LOOK JOKES ABOT BISCUITS ALL THE TIME. Vary the inside jokes or limit them. It's like reading the script for Little Britain (oh boy here it comes)
- It just seems flat and boring. Add more description, more variation in dialog.
- Nuke it from orbit
Shut up wolly, I like Klown.
By unpopular demand - What needs to be Changed:
- Paragraphs. Structure is nice.
- Humour. OH NO SAM FISHER IS STUPID. OH LOOK GIMP JUST INSULTS EVERYONE. OH LOOK JOKES ABOT BISCUITS ALL THE TIME. Vary the inside jokes or limit them. It's like reading the script for Little Britain (oh boy here it comes)
- It just seems flat and boring. Add more description, more variation in dialog.
- Nuke it from orbit
Bastard
1)Does it matter?
2)Little Britains Great
3)Then it would be less like a light read
4)Shut the fuck up no1 wants to hear ur opinion, u lost our respect, u suck :angry:
P.s. @ BaDToaD,dnt take it to heart. he's just pissed cos hes not in it